Copyright August 2003: Kimberly Sprecher
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September 2, 2010 its always fare weather was sang by beverly at the festival at the pilgrim building Corrected: Beverly sang "It's Always Fair Weather" at the festival at the Pilgrim Building. September 3, 2010 there truck would not start irregardless of what they did they finally called youre mechanic i think Corrected: Their truck would not start regardless of what they did; they finally called your mechanic, I think. September 7, 2010 wasnt that a good soccer game we seen with betty and margaret your friends Corrected: Wasn't that a good soccer game we saw with Betty and Margaret, your friends? September 8, 2010 the pipe burst during the morning during the afternoon dad founded someone to repair them Corrected: The pipe burst during the morning; during the afternoon, Dad found someone to repair it. September 9, 2010 dissecting earthworms is the name of an article in this Biology magazine do you want to read them Corrected: "Dissecting Earthworms" is the name of an article in this biology magazine. Do you want to read it? September 10, 2010 he has a bite on his line Janice exclaimed as she runs to help her brother Corrected: "He has a bite on his line!" Janice exclaimed as she ran to help her brother. September 13, 2010 the television show the price is right is on to early im still at school when it begin Corrected: The television show The Price Is Right is on too early; I'm still at school when it begins. September 14, 2010 nancy washed the car folds the newspapers and then she delivers them Corrected: Nancy washed the car, folded the newspapers, and then delivered them. September 15, 2010 pat and nancy want to go to the musical the king and i and im sure theyll like it Corrected: Pat and Nancy want to go to the musical The King and I, and I'm sure they'll like it. September 16, 2010 be careful not to fall off of the ladder and watching for falling shingles Corrected: Be careful not to fall off the ladder, and watch for falling shingles. September 17, 2010 she could have ran faster but she had tore one of her shoes consequently the race was lost by her Corrected: She could have run faster, but she had torn one of her shoes; consequently, she lost the race. September 20, 2010 were sure there is 5 groups attending the conference such attendance will break all records Corrected: We're sure there are five groups attending the conference; such attendance will break all records. September 21, 2010 the larsens and mandels boats were damaged on lake superior when teh to boats collided Corrected: The Larsen's and Mendel's boats were damaged on Lake Superior when the two boats collided. September 22, 2010 i should have read dark shadows which appeared in mystery magazine Corrected: I should have read "Dark Shadows," which appeared in Mystery Magazine. September 23, 2010 noone in my family hasnt never went to the art museum in chicago and saw picassos painting the blue guitarist Corrected: No one in my family has ever gone to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting The Blue Guitarist. September 24, 2010 there is five students who are all freshmen who will receive awards for his musical abilities Corrected: There are five students, all freshmen, who will receive awards for their musical abilities. September 27, 2010 my friend hasn't never put those rare plants outdoors cuz it cant stand sudden changes in temperature Corrected: My friend hasn't ever put those rare plants outdoors because they can't stand sudden changes in temperature. September 28, 2010 the us army are marching farther i believe then was expected Corrected: The U.S. Army is marching farther, I believe, than was expected. September 30, 2010 their car which was parked in someones garage was broke into it was vandalized Corrected: Their car, which was parked in someone's garage, was broken into and vandalized. October 1, 2010 there are several persons who wants to purchase springtime the better of our four paintings Corrected: Several persons want to purchase Springtime, the best of our four paintings. October 4, 2010 is your uncle reading lost horizons or is he watching all my children on television Corrected: Is your uncle reading Lost Horizons, or is he watching All My Children on television? October 5, 2010 hasn't gloria took the boxes to rustic park four the picnic Corrected: Hasn't Gloria taken the boxes to Rustic Park for the picnic? October 6, 2010 this here poem jabberwocky is fun to read but it dont appeal to most people Corrected: This poem "Jabberwocky" is fun to read, but it doesn't appeal to most people. October 7, 2010 both charlie and norm has saw stone mountain but neither have drove to the top Corrected: Both Charlie and Norm have seen Stone Mountain, but neither has driven to the top. October 11, 2010 if your not to tired it happens that we can finish painting this scenery tonight Corrected: If you're not too tired, we can finish painting this scenery tonight. October 12, 2010 maxine sidestepped the fast moving horse quick and a sigh of relief was breathed by her Corrected: Maxine quickly sidestepped the fast moving horse and breathed a sigh of relief. October 13, 2010 of the 1500 species of Spiders in the united states only 2 are considered dangerous said ms walters Corrected: "Of the 1,500 species of spiders in the United States, only two are considered dangerous," said Ms. Walters. October 14, 2010 help shouted the man that fell in lake erie Corrected: "Help!" shouted the man who fell into Lake Erie. October 15, 2010 mr nelson will give fred and i tickets to the game on tuesday january 25 irregardless of the whether Corrected: Mr. Nelson will give Fred and me tickets to the game on Tuesday, January 25, regardless of the weather. October 18, 2010 that girl sang in the musical annie which was at the newton center Corrected: That girl sang in the musical Annie , which was at the Newton Center. October 19, 2010 if you borrow me some money ill do youre weeding pick up the groceries and preparing the dinner Corrected: If you lend me some money, I'll do your weeding, pick up the groceries, and prepare dinner. October 20, 2010 the book the return of the native is considered among the better of hardys many novels Corrected: The book The Return of the Native is considered among the best of Hardy's many novels. October 21, 2010 there are several steps necessary to repair a broken window first remove the putty second remove the points or nails then replace the broken one with a new one Corrected: Several steps are necessary to repair a broken window: first, remove the putty; second, remove the points or nails; then, replace the broken glass with a new one. October 22, 2010 we would of froze during the storm but we seen a shelter that protected us from the high winds coming off of the rocky mountains Corrected: We would have frozen during the storm, but we saw a shelter that protected us from the high winds coming off the Rocky Mountains. October 25, 2010 mark needs to r'member to call his friend to set up a movie nite Corrected: Mark needs to remember to call his friend to set up a movie night. October 26, 2010 terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left Corrected: Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse; when no one answered, he left. October 27, 2010 i could of swam to that large island but its to rainy to try that Corrected: I could have swum to that large island, but it's too rainy to try that. November 1, 2010 me and my friend weared blue jeans we wasnt allowed in the whitney restaurant Corrected: Since my friend and I wore blue jeans, we weren't allowed in the Whitney Restaurant. November 2, 2010 the young man drived that there yellow convertible wearing a blue cap Corrected: The young man wearing a blue cap drove that yellow convertible. November 3, 2010 i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon Corrected: My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Street; unfortunately, we got off the bus two blocks too soon. November 4, 2010 because in order to repair youre battered Car which is all banged in ill have to do alot of repairing Corrected: In order to repair your battered car, I'll have to do a lot of work. November 5, 2010 kim was watching the movie the winds of war - at least i think she said that - when the television set burned out Corrected: Kim was watching the movie The Winds of War - at least I think she said that - when the television set burned out.
November 8, 2007 i reviewed the material real good i received a good grade on the final said kim Corrected: " I reviewed the material really well and I received a good grade on the final, " said Kim.
November 8, 2007 was the end of Quarter One. Go back to the last page and click on Quarter Two Daily Warm Ups! :)
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