Kim Sprecher
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November 7, 2011 (Monday) tim was to have gave we girls the editorials to right for the school newspaper howevers some other students writed it Corrected: Tim was to have given us girls the editorials to write for the school newspaper; however, some other students wrote them. November 8, 2011 (Tuesday) one of helens Sisters was born on march 18 1982 in cleveland ohio Corrected: One of Helen's sisters was born on March 18, 1982, in Cleveland, Ohio. November 9, 2011 (Wednesday) walking to a table in the seafood shanty the large flowered hat she was wearing made the woman stand out Corrected: Walking to a table in the Seafood Shanty, the woman wearing the large flowered hat stood out. November 10, 2011 NO SCHOOL November 11, 2011 NO SCHOOL November 14, 2011 (Monday) i like the coat that sarah bought at coopers department store with the reversible lining Corrected: I like the coat with the reversible lining that Sarah bought at Cooper's Department Store. November 15/16, 2011 (Tuesday/Wednesday) of those two girls i think that judy is the most reliable remarked adam as he set down Corrected: "Of those two girls, I think that Judy is the more reliable," remarked Adam as he sat down. November 17, 2011 (Thursday) there were sixty four students who obtained persmission to see the movie romeo and juliet at cinema 1 Corrected: Sixty-four students obtained permission to see the movie Romeo and Juliet at Cinema 1. November 18, 2011 (Friday) because he was sick explained the concerned Father my Son was twenty five minutes late Corrected: "Since he was sick," explained the concerned father, "my son was twenty-five minutes late." November 21, 2011 (Monday) the angry actress screamed at the Director grabs her coat and storming out of the varsity theatre Corrected: The angry actress screamed at the director, grabbed her coat, and stormed out of the Varsity Theatre. November 22, 2011 (Tuesday) crossing East on andrews blvd a late model buick almost hit will and leah Corrected: Crossing east on Andrews Blvd., a late-model Buick almost hit Will and Leah. November 23, 2011 (Wednesday) pearls which are used as gems are formed layer by layer inside of a oyster said mrs chang Corrected: "Pearls, which are used as gems, are formed layer by layer inside an oyster," said Mrs. Chang.
November 24, 2011: No School November 25, 2011: No School November 28, 2011 (Monday) she has wrote a novel entitled mysterious manor and sold a painting named remembrances Corrected: She has written a novel entitled Mysterious Manor and sold a painting named Remembrances. November 29, 2011 (Tuesday) watch out for the fresh paint dad shouted or youll get paint on youre coat Corrected: "Watch out for the fresh paint," Dad shouted, " or you'll get paint on your coat!" November 30, 2011 (Wednesday) we havent took no books to elmwood elementary school for two years or so give or take a few months Corrected: We haven't taken any books to Elmwood Elementary School for about two years. December 1, 2011 no ms larkin dont have those books that this here class neeeds Corrected: No, Ms. Larkin doesn't have those books that this class needs. December 2, 2011 ann and me choosed these here activities at camp to hike swimming horseback riding and to canoe Corrected: Ann and I chose these activities at camp: hiking, swimming, horseback riding, and canoeing. December 5, 2011 isn't norma and jose angry with paulines and helens removal of the projector Corrected: Aren't Norma and Jose angry at Pauline and Helen's removal of the projector? December 6, 2011 jesse and allan has gave presents to the orphanage many children will have gifts from santa claus Corrected: Jesse and Allan have given presents to the orphanage; many children will have gifts from Santa Claus. December 7, 2011 could them be the ones which climbed mt mckinley last Summer in alaska Could they be the ones who climbed Mt. McKinley last summer in Alaska? December 8, 2011 sometimes animals breaks into campers food supplies at yellowstone national park Corrected: Sometimes animals break into campers' food supplies at Yellowstone National Park. December 9, 2011 prof danvers stated last months science digest described the making of silicon chips Corrected: Prof. Danvers stated, "Last month's Science Digest described the making of silicon chips." December 12, 2011 two cars collided at the corner of highway 83 and meadow lane there drivers become involved in a argument Corrected: Two cars collided at the corner of Highway 83 and Meadow Lane; their drivers became involved in an argument. December 13, 2011 an editorial in the christian science monitor criticizing rep bensons position on tax return Corrected: An editorial in the Christian Science Monitor criticized Rep. Benson's position on tax return. December 14, 2011 hasn't fritz and pierre no ideas about what to do for ms savins surprise birthday party Corrected: Haven't Fritz and Pierre any ideas about what to do for Ms. Savin's surprise birthday party?
December 15, 2011 i wait one and one half hours when the train arrived at grand central station Corrected: I had waited 1 1/2 hours when the train arrived at Grand Central Station. December 16, 2011 my Grandfather he leaves for france on august 11 1918 to serve in the first world war Corrected: My grandfather left for France on August 11, 1918, to serve in the First World War. December 19, 2011 there are certain actions that show discourtesy intolerance and dishonesty which my parents doesnt allow or permit Corrected: My parents don't allow actions that show discourtesy, intolerance, and dishonesty. December 20, 2011 members of the hindu religion worships a deity called krishna in addition they worship vishnu Corrected: Members of the Hindu religion worship a deity called Krishna; in addition, they worship Vishnu. December 21, 2011: No Daily Warm UP December 22, 2011: No Daily Warm Up December 23: No School...Winter Break Begins Winter Break January 3, 2012 Corrected: My brother and I have chosen to do the following: start shopping for gifts, mailing our cards early, and planning two parties. January 4, 2012 the long poem childe harold's pilgrimage was wrote by lord byron kim stated and is considered one of the poets best Corrected: "The long poem Childe Harold's Pilgrimage was written by Lord Byron," Kim stated, "and is considered one of the poet's best." January 5, 2012 jim dont want nothing returned but time and sports illustrated the 2 magazines that he give to them students Corrected: Jim doesn't want anything returned but Time and Sports Illustrated, the two magazines that he gave to those students. January 6, 2012 the woman that was the one wearing the green hat should have brung her motehr and father with she Corrected: The woman wearing the green hat should have brought her mother and father with her. January 9, 2012: the american indian have knowed for a long time what it means to be persecuted dont you think Corrected: The American Indian has known for a long time what it means to be persecuted, don't you think? January 10,2012: mom stated you could of raise the window for more air or you could of open the door for more air Corrected: Mom stated," You could have raised the window or opened the door for more air." January 11, 2012: arent there alot of quoted passages in youre paragraph richard Corrected: Aren't there too many quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard? January 12, 2012: irregardless of the similarities youve noted the new york post is different than the new york daily news Corrected: Regardless of the similarities you've noted, the New York Post is different from the New York Daily News. |
Copyright August 2003: Kimberly Sprecher Last Updated: 01/28/2012 07:55 AM |
